This was really interesting to read, and I especially liked your thoughts on the Pleasants. You're right, change the genders of those involved, and the story changes a lot.

I really did like how you wrote the whole Elaine/Angus storyline. I had a feeling that there would be heartache somewhere along the line for Elaine, and thought the whole thing was very well done.

I'm glad that Linus is getting to be happy too.

Also, Lenore is just awesome. :)